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Laken the Protector

Post by Laken on Thu Apr 16, 2015 3:05 pm

Personal Info
Name: Laken
Alias: Lake, Laken the Protector
Gender: Female
Age: 36 moons
Personality: Laken has a short temper, but will never snap at a pack mate. She is also a very exuberant wolf, and is always speaking her mind. Laken has made it her duty to protect MoonPack from any harm.
Likes: Darkness, falling rain, learning history, and her pack.
Dislikes: Being alone, sitting still, and sometimes listening.
Fears: Fire, death, MoonPack being hurt.

Appearence
Size: 3 feet 5 inches (Laken's on the small side)
Eye color: Emerald green
Fur color: Black with light grey paws, tail, and muzzle. Laken also has light grey claw shaped markings on her back.
Objects/clothing: A necklace
Appearance: Laken is a stocky wolf. She blends into the shadows well due to her pelt colors. She also has longer fangs. Laken's necklace is black with a small emerald.
Laken:

Pack Information
Pack: MoonPack
Rank: Assassin
Family: Mother is Midnight, Father is Bear, and sister is Lynx
Mate: N/A
Pups: N/A

Skills and Abilities
Strengths: Fighting sneakily, bites do a lot of damage, confusing wolves by influencing their thoughts.
Weaknesses: Fighting up close, fighting against a wolf who can guard their mind, fighting in bright light.  
Special Powers: Laken can read minds and influence thoughts.
Combat Style: Up close and quick

Background
History: Both her parents were Hunters, her mother, Midnight, being the Lead Hunter.
RP Sample: Both long and short, it really just depends.
Laken darted between shadows, silently. She stopped dead, catching sight of her prey. Quickly she sprang from the shadows. The rabbit never stood a chance. With a quick bite Laken ended its life.


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Re: Laken the Protector

Post by Shine on Thu Apr 16, 2015 3:18 pm

A few things, you need to add more to your personality, and what rank is you wolf? She needs to have one.
What's the necklace look like?
Her special power doesn't fit MoonPack traits. Unless she had FuanaPack ancestry-very close, like a father o mother-she can't be able to do that.
MoonPack wolves are the second largest, and no wolf pack reaches as small as 2 feet tall.
If you need more info on wolf pack looks, go here: http://wolfmagic.forumotion.com/t3-pack-guides

And generally, some of your weaknesses and strengths don't make sense. A small wolf would be better fighting sneakily, and wouldn't do a lot of damage with a bite.
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Re: Laken the Protector

Post by Laken on Mon Apr 20, 2015 2:01 pm

I explained what the necklace looks like! Look at the appearance under appearance.
Laken can't be 2 feet 11 inches? Seriously? Not to be mean or anything... But that's just one tiny inch away from being 3 feet tall. I don't see how one inch is that big of a deal...
Umm... her bite would do a lot of damage because her fangs are long, making them able to hit places other wolves' fangs couldn't.
About the strengths/weaknesses: So your saying that a smaller wolf can't fight up close? That's kind of like saying that a small person can't be outgoing, they have to be shy. And I, in fact, am a really short person. Yet I'm outgoing, so that really hits a nerve...

Sorry if I'm sounding rude in any way! I don't mean to be Smile
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Re: Laken the Protector

Post by Myyra on Mon Apr 20, 2015 7:55 pm

((Whoops! Forgot which account I was on. ))

Alright, alright. Smile
If she was born into MoonPack she would have to be a bit bigger than almost two feet. MoonPack wolves average about 4 feet, so I'd say 3.5 feet would be small for them, maybe a tad smaller.
Since she has longer fangs, that would make sense for it to do a lot of damage, as well as being able to get up closer. You got me there, I didn't think of that.
She would be good fighting up close, but being a MoonPack wolf combined with her small size would make her good at fighting snekily, unless she's super clumsy. she could not like it, but it shouldn't be a huge weakness.
But that still leaves the question of your special power. She'd still have to have relatively close blood ties to Faunapack for that to work.
And i'm sorry if I sound rude or nit-picky as well. I don't mean it to be rude. And you're fine. Smile
And I didn't mean to hit a nerve, honest.
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Re: Laken the Protector

Post by Kurai on Tue Apr 21, 2015 1:16 pm

Is Delta a rank Shine?

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Re: Laken the Protector

Post by Myyra on Tue Apr 21, 2015 2:45 pm

((Still Shine.))

It is not a rank.
That's another thing you'll need to change.
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Re: Laken the Protector

Post by Laken on Sun May 17, 2015 12:01 pm

Is that better?
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Re: Laken the Protector

Post by Kurai on Tue May 26, 2015 9:30 am

I guess, if you want to be smaller than the average MoonPack.
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Re: Laken the Protector

Post by Laken on Wed May 27, 2015 5:16 am

Thanks!
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Re: Laken the Protector

Post by Kurai on Thu May 28, 2015 9:08 am

no problem.

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